Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:53 am Post subject: Frankenstein's Monster
A world given to normalcy
at my passing watches warily
my eyes as dry as desert sand
they think i do not understand
the emotions that they come to feel
a weight that causes me to kneel
an inner light that goes unknown
behind a mask of flesh and bone
science gone wrong, abomination
the darker side of man's creation
to wander forth and ever be
iconic of man's duplicity
a nomadic trek of haunted steps
a wait to see God's promise kept
that though unnatural the birth
he least in me might find some worth
my days to me fragmented dreams
a patchwork heart with nightmare seams
love from none to spare upon
this life-given automaton _________________ +Blog: http://itsdeeperthanyouknow.blogspot.com/
+"Beneath all chaos lies perfect order"
All who confuse Frankenstein with his monster shall have their noses filled with chili peppers _________________ Pwning the threads with my mad 1337 skillz.
All who confuse Frankenstein with his monster shall have their noses filled with chili peppers
no idea why you felt the need to bring that up.
since no one in this thread has yet made that error.
looking at the title of my poem, you can see i certainly haven't anyways. _________________ +Blog: http://itsdeeperthanyouknow.blogspot.com/
+"Beneath all chaos lies perfect order"
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 11:45 pm Post subject:
Cool poem. I thought that I was the only one who identified with the monster but since I've been on this forum I've seen this reference crop up on numerous occasions. _________________ As long as man continues to be the ruthless destroyer of lower living beings he will never know health or peace. For as long as men massacre animals, they will kill each other.
ahh, k.
well, just thought i'd clarify the point anyhow.
but i agree btw. so many people make that confusion _________________ +Blog: http://itsdeeperthanyouknow.blogspot.com/
+"Beneath all chaos lies perfect order"
Cool poem. I thought that I was the only one who identified with the monster but since I've been on this forum I've seen this reference crop up on numerous occasions.
yeah, it's a take from the monster's perspective.
but when i wrote it i also sorta identified with it. so i guess aspies and auties may be able to identify with it also. _________________ +Blog: http://itsdeeperthanyouknow.blogspot.com/
+"Beneath all chaos lies perfect order"
Was it the "Funk-enstein" one with the black version of Frankenstein's monster? Or was that on MadTV? i forget _________________ +Blog: http://itsdeeperthanyouknow.blogspot.com/
+"Beneath all chaos lies perfect order"
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