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Ferdinand
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02 Aug 2010, 5:04 pm

I am found.
I am found,
in the forests of remembrance.

I von, and von.
To find nothing,
the more I von, the more I see.

I have no existence.
Every creature don't be called.
To ever before me has seen.

How'd I get this far,
but no knowing where the moon.
A long time ago EVERY thing admire me.

The sheet I walked over,
was paved in pure iron.
Everything I YELL,
everything I whisper,
will always be granted.

this is my poem do you guys like it?


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02 Aug 2010, 5:05 pm

hey wait a moment it sounds fimlair but i can't put my finger on it :?


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02 Aug 2010, 5:05 pm

Mine is better. :-P

Where I'm From

I am from playrooms,
from G.I. Joes and Cowboys and Indians.
I am from the squash growing awkwardly
(white, yellow
pretending to love it.)
I am from tossed logs,
the bag pipe
whose long silent pipes
still ring in my ear.

I'm from burned bacon and donations,
From Sallyirene and someone I don't care for.
I'm from the rolly pollies
and the snails,
from cheer up and settle down.
I'm from "THOU SHALT NOT STEAL OR LIE"
with the littlest fibs
and the strangest reasons.

I'm from McDonald's and Carl's Jr,
cheese cake and french fries,
from the scar on my brother's shoulder
from the light bulb fragments
to the money my mother spent to keep us happy.
On the old shelf were binders
holding pictures in place,
many, many moments in time I don't remember
to make me wonder, "What was I thinking?"
Those are my moments-
frozen in time,
never to be relived.


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MONIQUEIJ
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02 Aug 2010, 5:07 pm

TeaEarlGreyHot wrote:
Mine is better. :-P

Where I'm From

I am from playrooms,
from G.I. Joes and Cowboys and Indians.
I am from the squash growing awkwardly
(white, yellow
pretending to love it.)
I am from tossed logs,
the bag pipe
whose long silent pipes
still ring in my ear.

I'm from burned bacon and donations,
From Sallyirene and someone I don't care for.
I'm from the rolly pollies
and the snails,
from cheer up and settle down.
I'm from "THOU SHALT NOT STEAL OR LIE"
with the littlest fibs
and the strangest reasons.

I'm from McDonald's and Carl's Jr,
cheese cake and french fries,
from the scar on my brother's shoulder
from the light bulb fragments
to the money my mother spent to keep us happy.
On the old shelf were binders
holding pictures in place,
many, many moments in time I don't remember
to make me wonder, "What was I thinking?"
Those are my moments-
frozen in time,
never to be relived.


nice poem


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MONIQUEIJ
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02 Aug 2010, 5:09 pm

wait it sounds like my poem but not mines,
i'm lost
I'm lost in the forest of forgetfulness
I run and run to find a place
more I run more I see I have no existence
every creature don't recall me ever before being seen.

How did I get this far
to not knowing where to move,
when long time ago everything admire me
the street I walk on was paved with pure gold.

Every demand I yelled
every demand I whisper
would always be fulfilled

my name said with royalty and pride.

Now I walk people don't even look
my way the riches I once own now gone away with the wind.

I'm lost in the forest of forgetfulness I run and run to find my place
who am I no one remembers .


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02 Aug 2010, 5:10 pm

... No. You stole that off of me!

Please delete it.


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02 Aug 2010, 5:12 pm

Ferdinand wrote:
... No. You stole that off of me!

Please delete it.


no i did not honest i can prove it
http://www.facebook.com/pages/MONIQUE-I ... 6485176552

it's there. i don't still poetry i write my own.


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02 Aug 2010, 5:12 pm

I was all cursed since my birth ‎
I didn’t belong to this earth‎
I looked around sad with my health
A child stayed alone in the quiet heath
and my only cure is just a myth.

I looked around and I had a sigh ‎
Sad, alone and depressed am I ‎
I asked my God who lies in the high ‎
Requesting death to be so nigh‎
No reply and I thought he 's a lie.‎

Alone in my room where I rest ‎
Looked into my mind, my own pest ‎
There‘s no escape I tried my best
But In heart inside the bony chest ‎
A slim hope is setting in the nest.‎

I was judged to not be a thing ‎
Labeled to live in a giant ring ‎
The shouts on me sound like a ping
I was described as an empty ding
That has nothing for the world to bring. ‎

With the help of my nurse of light
My mother came to put me tight ‎
So I can live the rest of my life right
And regain faith in the only might ‎
who provided me a new sight.‎


To all the ones with the same case ‎
Do not ever quit the precious mace ‎
The mace of faith, be your ace ‎
Struggle in the world face to face‎
And faith in self is the only brace.



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02 Aug 2010, 5:14 pm

MONIQUEIJ wrote:
Ferdinand wrote:
... No. You stole that off of me!

Please delete it.


no i did not honest i can prove it
http://www.facebook.com/pages/MONIQUE-I ... 6485176552

it's there. i don't still poetry i write my own.


you best be trolling


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02 Aug 2010, 5:15 pm

Illusion


J'ai perdu ce que je n'ai jamais eu,
Perdu une bataille que je n'ai jamais combattu
Je me suis dupé dans ma tête
Il Était juste une pensée bête
Il n'y avait jamais quelque chose
Et il n'y aura jamais cette chose
Il Était tout juste une imagination
Procédé par mon immature passion
Je vous ai voulu, mais j’ai jamais fait un pas
Comme de vous inviter à un repas
Mais il n'y avait jamais quelque chose
Pour vous tenter ou pour vous toucher, ma rose
J'ai été complètement perdu
Qu’est-ce que j'ai attendu ?



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02 Aug 2010, 5:16 pm

We're no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
You wouldn't get this from any other guy
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand

CHORUS
Never gonna give you up,
Never gonna let you down,
Never gonna run around and desert you,
Never gonna make you cry,
Never gonna say goodbye,
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
And if you ask me how I'm feeling
Don't tell me you're too blind to see

(CHORUS)

CHORUSCHORUS
(Ooh give you up)
(Ooh give you up)
(Ooh) never gonna give, never gonna give
(give you up)
(Ooh) never gonna give, never gonna give
(give you up)

We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it

I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand



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02 Aug 2010, 5:17 pm

Leekduck wrote:
We're no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
You wouldn't get this from any other guy
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand

CHORUS
Never gonna give you up,
Never gonna let you down,
Never gonna run around and desert you,
Never gonna make you cry,
Never gonna say goodbye,
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
And if you ask me how I'm feeling
Don't tell me you're too blind to see

(CHORUS)

CHORUSCHORUS
(Ooh give you up)
(Ooh give you up)
(Ooh) never gonna give, never gonna give
(give you up)
(Ooh) never gonna give, never gonna give
(give you up)

We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it

I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand


How... original. lol


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02 Aug 2010, 5:17 pm

TeaEarlGreyHot wrote:
Leekduck wrote:
We're no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
You wouldn't get this from any other guy
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand

CHORUS
Never gonna give you up,
Never gonna let you down,
Never gonna run around and desert you,
Never gonna make you cry,
Never gonna say goodbye,
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
And if you ask me how I'm feeling
Don't tell me you're too blind to see

(CHORUS)

CHORUSCHORUS
(Ooh give you up)
(Ooh give you up)
(Ooh) never gonna give, never gonna give
(give you up)
(Ooh) never gonna give, never gonna give
(give you up)

We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it
Inside we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it

I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand


How... original. lol



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02 Aug 2010, 5:18 pm

lol you


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02 Aug 2010, 6:33 pm

your mum is an iambic pentameter


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02 Aug 2010, 6:43 pm

Hodor wrote:
your mum is an iambic pentameter


this was a joke dood


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