Rax
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 Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 3:22 am Post subject: The Aspie war |
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I'm writing a story called the Aspie war (As you can probably tell from the title) The gist of it is that all Aspie traits are demonic or angelic related and that suddenly Aspies gain divine or hellish powers, such as the ability to shoot lightning or heal the sick and so on. Chaos comes in when the government starts to control the Aspies and eventual orders the execution of all Aspies, war break out and I haven't thought about how it will end yet.
I wouldn't mind getting some feed back about the idea. (I already have an intro chapter written)
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2980685/1/The_Aspie_war
Tell me what you think.
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Rob-N4RPS
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| Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 3:55 am Post subject: |
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That sounds VERY interesting. The inspiration for your story lends some credence to some things I've been thinking about for some time now.
Given the way this world is going, such a story could very well end up being prophetic, not fictional. Personally, I think Aspies will play a special role in what is to come.
No one saw Jules Verne and other science fiction greats as visionaries in their time, either.
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TreehuggerXXL
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| Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 5:55 am Post subject: |
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Hi,
I really like the way you link angels, demons and aspie's 
1 thing you might want to consider. The plot kind of reminds me of xmen 3 alot.  If you haven't seen that movie yet it might be a good thing to do before you finish you're story. Keep up the story writing thing, you obviously have the imagination for it  |
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Rax
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| Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 7:54 am Post subject: |
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I intend to avoid as many cliches and well known ideas, speaking of which, any one got any ideas.
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| Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 8:51 am Post subject: |
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[Moved from General Autism Discussion to Art, Writing, and Music]
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SyphonFilter
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| I've thought of making a story where there is a group of Aspies calling themselves "Aspi-Legion" who end up creating giant mechas and tools of war against what they feel is their "neurotypical oppressors". The leader of this group, however, is secretly trying to perfect ancient medicine in hopes of becoming a god. Aspi-Legion create meds called asperfetamines that allow them to become superhumans. The meds work on a certain gene that only Aspies have, so nothing happens if an NT takes them. With the enhancements provided by asperfetamine, Aspi-Legion begins terrorizing world governments, gathering up NT's to place in "NT Concentration Camps", as well as Aspies who refuse to fight for their cause. At this time, a small party of Aspies opposed to Aspi-Legion manage to get their hands on a bit of asperfetamine, carrying out guerrila attacks against Aspi-Legion. The party manages to back the powerful Aspi-Legion against a wall, finally facing Aspi-Legion's leader (who is now immortal) in a final showdown at the Earth's core (which is flowing full of asperfetamine). |
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