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kxmode
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Roxas_XIII
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Nice. I like it. BTW, I just signed up for DeviantArt so I could post my manga online for my friends. MY username is Long-live-Japan (Code Geass reference)
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Apera
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Quite impressive. Haven't seen much of the competition yet, but you've definitely got a good shot. Makes me wonder if i should try... it'd be hand-drawn though.
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your work is very professional looking i like it a lot,
the text on the asphalt hoodie though looks a bit wrong to me, my eyes would like to see it in another place, this is just me though, perhaps you might agree or not
best of luck in the competition roxas |
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kxmode
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| Apera wrote: | | Quite impressive. Haven't seen much of the competition yet, but you've definitely got a good shot. Makes me wonder if i should try... it'd be hand-drawn though. |
The Nike logo was hand-drawn. 
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Roxas_XIII
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| Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 9:50 am Post subject: |
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| frequently wrote: | your work is very professional looking i like it a lot,
the text on the asphalt hoodie though looks a bit wrong to me, my eyes would like to see it in another place, this is just me though, perhaps you might agree or not
best of luck in the competition roxas |
Oh, I'm not entering the competition. I was just commenting on kxmode's entry, and talking about the manga that I am posting on DA. But thanks anyways.
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Delirium
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Wow, that's a perfect logo. And your icon is awesome. ;D
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ilster
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Scary - but none of them are nearly as beautifully executed as yours! Their typography is a bit clumsy - yours is perfect  |
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kxmode
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computerlove
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| Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:27 am Post subject: |
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Looking good
some notes to make it even better:
1.- the left one is a little bit lower, check the dotted line.
2.- the right one's "foot" is lower that the circle, see again dotted line.
3.- watch out the connections, be more careful when joining parts, check red arrows.
Shown next: a before and after, i have already moved up the left one.
I'd also strongly recommend rounding all the corners because it looks unprofessional.
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kxmode
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computerlove
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OCD (obsessive compulsive designer) at your service (:
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Roxas_XIII
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| kxmode wrote: | | cool! thanks for the suggestions puterlove |
He did that with my manga too
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