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21 Sep 2014, 3:37 pm

You may use:
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-Mary Sue traits
-any other terrible ideas you come up with

I will begin...


"OMG" i sed loudly. "he is like so hawt omg" i sed fanning myself with my hand like i was hot and looking at the hot guy with black hair and really dark eyes. (he looks like Skandar Keynes!! !! !! ! omgomg) all the sudden he grew fangs and then he turned into a bat but then he saw me and turned back into a hot guy and cam over 2 me all mad with anger and angry madness in his gorjuss eyes.

"hey u" his voise was angry but still really hot! i almost faintid. "what u lookin at for? u shuld have sometheng beter 2 do!! !!" he was really mad.

"ur a vampyer i saw u chang 2 a bat but then u changd back i saw u" then i look at him with my majic eyes and he looked less madder.

wen i was a baby me and my rents (thats short 4 parents lol) where in crash and they dieded but i was alive. i never new my rents really but i think they were sikick and culd cuntrol minds b/c so can i!! ! i have rilly bright green eyes that look rilly pritty in the sunlite an every1 says their gorjiss. well my eyes can also cents what other ppl r thinking and i can control they'reir thots & stuff!! !!@#!#!#$!

"wow ur really gorguss" the hot vampyir guy looked in my relly pritty green eyes and his mouth fell open so i saw his fangs. "i luv yur eyes and..."

i culd read his mind so i new wut he would say next!! !!

"i luv u."

then all the sudden two guys jumped out (the were rilly hot 2 but not as hot as the vampiyerire guy) and they were like "NO WE LUV HER MORE THEN U BACK OFF BATTY!! !! !! !! !! !!"

but then i gasped cuz they'reirre blood went everyware wen the hot vandpyre suckd theyier blod are they fell with theieyr necks all bloody and grosssss!! !!

the hot guy said meanly but kind of romantiklee, "no they didunt luv u!! I LUV U!! !! !! !! !"

but i was 2 freked out and ran away and cryed becuz of teh dead hot guys the hawt vampyiereyr killed.

"omg y do i have 2 b so prety!??!?!?! !?" i louderly cried. "my beeuty is a currse!! !! !"



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21 Sep 2014, 5:08 pm

Once up on a time, I went to the chippy. When I got there I bought a bag of chips. I put salt and vinegar on them and I ate them on my way home.

"That was very f*****g selfish of you" said my step sister as she kicked the living s**t out of me.

"Yes I know it was" I said back to her "But you're already fat enough".

The End.


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21 Sep 2014, 5:26 pm

I'll try scary;

I can't understand why they left me here, its so dark and cold, surely cremating me would have been easier!



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21 Sep 2014, 5:30 pm

One day I was skipping down the street when a conker fell out of the sky and hit me on the head.

"WTF" I said as I looked up, only to see a cheeky little squirrel laughing at me.

So anyway, I climbed that f*****g tree like a shot out of a gun and caught the squirrel.

I didn't really know what to do with it in the end so I just let it go.

I got stuck up the tree anyway, and I'm still there now writing this.


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21 Sep 2014, 5:55 pm

One day I went in a rocket and flew to the moon.

The moon was quite dusty, so I got out my cleaning stuff and had a quick tidy round.

Then I got back in my rocket and came back to Earth.

That was last Saturday.


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21 Sep 2014, 5:58 pm

She watched him walk away, a single rose cast to the ground.


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21 Sep 2014, 6:05 pm

The man in the hat killed the other man in the hat.


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21 Sep 2014, 6:13 pm

He lived.


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26 Sep 2014, 10:36 am

They snuck into town and snuck in to the houses and some waited while the Boss did his thing, and then they snuck some more, and when they were hungry, they said they wanted to go to Denny's, PLEASE?, but Santa said 'No, not until we are done!'

So the hungry reindeer stamped their feet on the roof and broke a lot of holes in the shingles and the snow got in and ruined all the carpets and wallpaper and everybody's clothes.


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26 Sep 2014, 3:37 pm

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26 Sep 2014, 3:53 pm

One day whilst I was guarding my masters house, I heard a noise.

So then I started barking.

It turned out to be the postman. I hate the postman!

I ran to the door and as he pushed the letters through the door I tore them out of his hand.

I then proceeded to rip the letters up.

When my master came home, he saw what I had done, he tapped me on the nose and called me a bad dog. Then he sent me to my basket.

I curled up and fell asleep and I dreamt about chasing cats.


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27 Sep 2014, 6:34 am

There's no story, no characters, no plot, no nothing.


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27 Sep 2014, 8:46 am

Title: Lovving Hart

Wuns uppon a time, their wuz a very butiful wuman called Margaret. She lovd cute small children very much bcauze they wer very lovvly and Her hart felt very worm when she see a cute children,. She also luvs herself very much bcauze luvving cute children make her a grate pirsen, She wuz shure god lovs her, too, for being a grate pursen. When she see a cute children she went like, ?oh my dog! Isn?t it adorible!?? teres of joy came outta her eyes when she wuz happy.

Wunday she find a small cute childrens crying in the side of cunntry steet. Her hart felt so sad and she cryed, too. The teres were butiful. She went ?wat hapend my sweet hart darlin??? as she squatted besides the children, the children terned into a big hidious monster and the monster eat Margaret.



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27 Sep 2014, 4:48 pm

One day when I went to the seaside, the wind was blowing really bad.

Then it started raining.

So I put my coat on and zipped it up.

That seemed to do the trick.


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27 Sep 2014, 8:47 pm

My dog scratched because she itched and it was a flea biting her, so I looked for it in her fur and I found it and I squashed it.


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28 Sep 2014, 12:52 am

This story is about Mary Sue traits but I don't know what they are. The end.


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