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An informal piece of writing

 
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 1:10 am    Post subject: An informal piece of writing Reply with quote

It seems lately that the world is frustrating me and im not sure what to do about it. Perhaps that statement is vague, but so are my feelings lately. So i decided to write something. If you like it comment, or likewise if you dont. If you think it can be better, which i'm sure it can be, tell me if you so choice. In any case, thanks for reading.

The World Today

As the wind blows, across my face
I stare into the bright, blue sky
And ponder our position in outer space
Whether it really matters at all.

The weather changes, all the time
So too does our aging minds
That wonder if it is a crime
To accept our current position.

Wise men babble wasted words
Forcing childern to listen hard
that then overthrow oppressive lords
That preached in ugly deception.

As one strolls along the shore
Watching the violence of the waves
Wandering soul from tales of lore
Finds no shelter from the storm.

Confused letters sent far away
Never to reach their destination
Such a waste of a summer's day
To tell someone you love them.

Cold and bitter heart remain
While morning sun awake the world
Comedy can not kill the pain
Just highlights the dramatic irony.

When sitting under an old, oak tree
Found an apple I started to eat
But then, suddenly, was stolen from me
Sighed softly, went to sleep.

A victim of drug-induce dreams
Covering up my reality
Great ideas are flowing streams
Polluted by sheer stupidity.

The moon, the silly servent
Controlled by powers beyond its control
An American guy is who we sent
To lay claim over its desolute beauty.

Rain brings new birth to life
As I think of wrong and right
The cynic's comment may be a knife
But Mother Nature still offers healing.
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