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Shastania
Snowy Owl
Joined: Feb 18, 2008
Age: 20
Posts: 164
Location: Dublin, Ireland
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 Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 12:52 pm Post subject: |
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Emo poem #1:
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Drink drink drink
Drink 'till you've got bad breath
Slash slash slash
Slash yourself to death
Choke choke choke
Choke 'til the world turns black
Cry cry cry
Cry 'cause you know that life is crap
Emo poem #2:
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I want to draw a picture
A picture with a twist
I'll draw with a razor blade
I'll draw it on my wrist
And as I draw this picture
A river will appear
And as this river flows
So my pain shall disappear |
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Hodor
Phoenix
Joined: Mar 18, 2008
Age: 19
Posts: 834
Location: On a dumb island
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An Ode Upon The Recent Poems of Shastania
Your second poem
Is definitely emo
But not pretentious
(Yes, that was meant to be a haiku. But sadly not emo  )
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