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 Forum: Art, Writing, and Music   Topic: Could someone please proofread my essay?

Frankster
 Post subject: suggestions for your essay.
Posted: 28 Feb 2009, 10:04 pm 

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You have written your essay very well. Here are just a few suggestions. When you write "It is imperative that we learn to get along with them" who is we and who is them? I would suggest: It is imperative that we all learn to get along together. Since your first paragraph already says this, take out ...
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