i posted this months ago but i didnt get much advice poll

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time
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27 Aug 2007, 7:49 pm

its a kirby comic i know it sucks and i know my spelling is horible just give me advice

(_-_)zzzzzz <(a_a<)IM A KIRBY GIRL IN THIS KIRBY WORLD

(_-_)zzz (^a_a^)IM A KIRBY GIRL IN THIS KIRBY WORLD

(_-_)z (>a_a)>OH ITS SO SIMPLE IM MADE COMPLETELY MADE OF KEYBORD SYMBOLES

(>*_*)>what kind of hell is this? <(a_a<) im just singing

(>*_*)> STOP!! ! (^a_a^)IM A KIRBY GIRL IN THIS KIRBY WORLD

(>*_*)>no seriosusly what kind of HELL is this <(a_a<)my name is hyper Kirby whats yours

(>*_*)>im sarcastic kirby may I as what in the hell is your problem <(a_a<)nothing

(>*_*)>… what idiot did this to me <(a_a<) most likely someone borde lonely or stupid

SILENCE

(>0_0)> Speak not against your creator <(*_*<)or all of the above

(>0_0)> I shall leave here not before creating another one of you. Which later in the story will have a past which ultimately creas a plot hole yet I don’t care also do not insult me again or I shall use “the backspace”

*poof* (>o_o)>…. Im Born I feel a great happiness <(a_a<)or all of the above HAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHA

(>*_*)>oh will you shut up its not that funny <(o_o<) and now my happiness is dead <(g_g<)meanie

(>*_*)>oh your happiness isn’t dead yet it will die in a most slowly painful way <(o_o<) im going to ignore that and live in blissful
. ignorance

(>*_*)>so before she asks whats your name <(o_o<) Normal kirby <(a_a<) YAH BLISSSSSS HISSSS YAY

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27 Aug 2007, 8:04 pm

well, I can certainly see why you didn't get much advice!

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27 Aug 2007, 8:09 pm

... is that an insult ???

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27 Aug 2007, 8:11 pm

sinsboldly wrote:

well, I can certainly see why you didn't get much advice!

*laughing out loud in the school computer lab*

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27 Aug 2007, 8:13 pm

sinsboldly wrote:

well, I can certainly see why you didn't get much advice!

that's cruel :roll:

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27 Aug 2007, 8:15 pm

If you need to do a spell check and don't have software, put the document on a floppy or a thumb drive, take it to the library and use Word.

Is that what you were asking? :?:

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27 Aug 2007, 8:15 pm

time wrote:

... is that an insult ???

A little explanation would help! :wink:

What kind of advice are you looking for?

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27 Aug 2007, 8:15 pm

time wrote:

... is that an insult ???

not at all.

I was merely stating my opinion that what I could follow of the post didn't suggest what advice you were looking for. Evidently my advice to perhaps give me more of a clue was taken as an insult. If so, I apologize,it was not my intention.

Merle

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27 Aug 2007, 8:16 pm

im getting made fun of even here wow i really do suck

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27 Aug 2007, 8:17 pm

uhhh no one is making fun of you
it was a misunderstanding
and no you don't suck

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27 Aug 2007, 8:18 pm

im joking im just asking for ways to make it funnier and more understandble

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27 Aug 2007, 8:49 pm

this is gona fade into obscurity again

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27 Aug 2007, 8:54 pm

na...Ohhh...draw it on paper...or paint
gives it an artistic touch

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27 Aug 2007, 8:55 pm

So, clue us in.

Is this a song? do I know the tune?
is this a poem? perhaps a live reading would give it the zing needed to let us know what you are going for?

Merle

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27 Aug 2007, 9:08 pm

it a comdy comic its made with kirbys like this

(>o_o)> i have "o" type eyes that means im not impotant ....

like that u got to read it line by line

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27 Aug 2007, 9:11 pm

I kind of enjoyed it. I don't know why no one gets it.

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