Claradoon wrote:
You know, there may not be anything wrong at all with having a rambling style of writing. Look at Leon Uris, for example. He's all over the place until he gets to what he's finally saying. But he puts heart and soul into all the side trips - he doesn't disrespect them, and neither should we. Look at Moby Dick - the most rambling and the greatest novel in American literature.
I think you should trust the process. There is "Something" running this universe and you are part of it. Let go. Don't judge your self-expression. Make an appointment with yourself a year from now to see how it turned out. Then ignore it and let it grow.
How does that sound?
Honestly it sounds detatched from reality. I don't want to pioneer a new breed of writing stlye, i want to get my point across. I want to pass coursework. I want people to agree to my plan or idea. I want to explain my reasoning for something.
I don't write words for me, i write words for the audience and i need to do what is required to reach them, not expect them to reach me.
If we were talking artistic writing then sure.