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19 May 2010, 11:03 pm

well, I have decided to branch out and actually experiment with writing lyrics for once. I will say though I care not if they rhyme or whatever, its the general meaning I have put behind these that I like. As for music to go with it, thing of something along the lines of tool or another similar band.


The Grand Illusion

This never was meant to be
another way to feel
This is all just a memory
and a vision of things yet to come... (this line then echoes on for a bit)


Where am I again...
What is this state of mind
Where was I again...
Is this the end...

|CHORUS BEGIN|
Nothing is what it seems
In this cruel unforgiving reality
Everything you have ever known
Is all but a lie

Your optimism frustrates me
Your in need of some clarity
Because everything you know
Is just a f*****g lie
|CHORUS END|

Rose-Coloured glasses tossed aside
Opening my eyes to a new way
Everythings now clear to me
I've waken up to a brand new day...

|CHORUS| (repeat 2x)

Seeing reality for what it is
A cruel f****d up game
That is just what it is
Its creator just a god in name...

Life has come full circle again
Have I chose the right way
I dont want to go through this again
theres nothing but regrets.



(EDIT: got rid of the "never was, never will, be anything" lines, tried to put likes that fit in better to replace them, its a bit difficult though with how I imagine the song being performed however.)


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20 May 2010, 6:28 am

sounds pretty heavy metal to me.



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20 May 2010, 7:35 am

auntblabby wrote:
sounds pretty heavy metal to me.


Yeah it is.

As for my own interpretation for it, its pretty much about a wide-eyed idealist getting his hopes and dreams shattered, who then becomes jaded to the cruel reality of the world.


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20 May 2010, 8:31 am

"Never was and never will be" is a major part of the refrain of an Evanescence song, be advised. :wink:


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20 May 2010, 8:58 am

Ambivalence wrote:
"Never was and never will be" is a major part of the refrain of an Evanescence song, be advised. :wink:


can change it, its not like im actually gonna perform it though, its just simply something that needed to be pushed out of my head so I can have a clear head to help me fall asleep easier. Its hard to sleep when the hampster wheel keeps on turning :P


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10 Jun 2010, 4:14 pm

When I saw this topic name I thought it was gonna be about the Styx album. :lol:

I was gonna say that I have that album on vinyl. I love records.


But anyway. Nice song I like it.



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10 Jun 2010, 4:49 pm

dazedgatsby wrote:
When I saw this topic name I thought it was gonna be about the Styx album. :lol:

I was gonna say that I have that album on vinyl. I love records.


But anyway. Nice song I like it.


Thanks, glad you like it.

I need to find an easy to use drum loop/drum machine program for me to do the drum and bass track for the song. FruityLoops is just too confusing for me :/

I can do the guitar track myself though via the real thing.


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