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computerlove
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15 Jun 2009, 1:58 am

Cut up poetry attempts using Poetik, an iPhone app:

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My impiety that

remember,

abuses gravity

My wear,

his gates.

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I dig walls for posterity

heart becomes the dispatch,

profitless,

those fear may hath

torture 'greeing

transport bait


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16 Jun 2009, 10:02 pm

for OSX there's CutUpo: link


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December's falsehood,
finding my determination,
unear'd maiden so prophetic
those voices cherish, spur,
fresh, wet, afar substance
blood harvest scarcely cures


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16 Jun 2009, 11:23 pm

Although a collection of random phrases may act as a literary Rorschach or a kind of Jackson Pollock way of using words, as a practicing poet I find the concept marginal at best for invoking originality.



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17 Jun 2009, 1:43 am

glad you liked (:


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17 Jun 2009, 1:50 am

computerlove wrote:
glad you liked (:


I use the same procedure graphically when permitting selected colored inks on a wetted surface to interact with water and oil based paints. As with your poetry it is merely the beginning and requires cooperative imaginative pattern perceptions to move it into imagery.