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curtis122
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10 Nov 2009, 5:31 am

Hello I have only just started writing poetry. I know this one does not really ryme (As far as i know poems dont ahve to) anyway here it is.

Don’t put your self esteam
In someone else’s appraisal
Don’t put your future on
Some one else’s shoulders
Don’t look at your self with someone else’s words
Look in the mirror decide for your self
Your missing a piece
The one in the middle
Your problem is with life
Maybe this book will help , you ask in disper
You cant expect an author to solve your problems
All he will solve is if he can have caviar for his tea or not
If the problem is life
Youv just got to live it.

Don’t have faith in your gun
But don’t have faith in you pen
Don’t have faith that someone will make things all right
Have faith , you will make things all right

Don’t rely on somoneles love and respect
Have faith in the love and respect for your self
dout have faith in a book with no auther
Don’t have faith with something in the clouds
Don’t have faith with old fashioned words
Don’t have faith with someone so judgmental
But you can
I know you can
Have faith in your self



CockneyRebel
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10 Nov 2009, 10:19 am

I love that poem. It speaks volumes to me. :)


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curtis122
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10 Nov 2009, 12:53 pm

Wow thanks :-)