Giftorcurse
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16 Jun 2013, 7:26 pm
I admit that I'm a better writer than I am an artist, but what the heck?
17 Jun 2013, 2:38 pm
Giftorcurse
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18 Jun 2013, 6:01 am
Beppieiscool
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18 Jun 2013, 2:37 pm
-Capable of outrunning trains
-Capable of flight at speeds of Mach 3
-Capable of moving battleships and reducing enemies to pudding with his fists
-Capable of emitting sonic screams.
-Capable of withstanding a nuclear blast at ground zero.
-Capable of withstanding extreme temperatures.
-Capable of surviving unaided in the vacuum of space.
-Capable of dodging bullets.
Can you clarify sonic screams a bit? How much damage does it cause? And any other affects it causes?
Is "dodging bullets" like Deadpool's superpower of "common sense"?
Besides this I have no problem with your story. I'm very curious as how it will play out.
(Here's a picture of Deadpool in case you didn't know what I was talking about)
Giftorcurse
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18 Jun 2013, 3:16 pm
-Capable of outrunning trains
-Capable of flight at speeds of Mach 3
-Capable of moving battleships and reducing enemies to pudding with his fists
-Capable of emitting sonic screams.
-Capable of withstanding a nuclear blast at ground zero.
-Capable of withstanding extreme temperatures.
-Capable of surviving unaided in the vacuum of space.
-Capable of dodging bullets.
Can you clarify sonic screams a bit? How much damage does it cause? And any other affects it causes?
Is "dodging bullets" like Deadpool's superpower of "common sense"?
Besides this I have no problem with your story. I'm very curious as how it will play out.
(Here's a picture of Deadpool in case you didn't know what I was talking about)
His sonic screams are capable of shattering glass, busting eardrums and shaking foundations of buildings. At its loudest, an entire city block can hear it.
His superhuman reflexes enable him to dodge bullets/projectiles/etc. That's what I meant.
Beppieiscool
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18 Jun 2013, 10:14 pm
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