Locked In (SpongeBob fanfic)

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PART ONE

We enter The Krusty Krab, Squidward is standing at the register

Squidward: May I take your order?
Fish: No, you may not take my order! It is for me to enjoy, not you!
Squidward: No, I mean "what do you want to eat?"
Fish: Oh! I'd like a Krabby Patty please.
Squidward: (To SpongeBob) SpongeBob, it's the usual food.
SpongeBob: One "usual" coming right up!
Squidward: (To fish) Please go to your table, we'll tell you when it's ready.

The fish walks away

Mr. Krabs: (Voice over the intercom) This is a Krusty Krab announcement, all employees are to report to my office immediately!

Fish: Oh great! Now I'll have to wait even longer for my Krabby Patty!

Squidward and SpongeBob enter Mr. Krabs' office

Mr. Krabs: I have an important announcement to make.

We wait 5 seconds

Squidward: Well?
Mr. Krabs: Sorry, I was trying to build dramatic tension. All employees are to leave 5 minutes earlier today.
SpongeBob: But why?
Mr. Krabs: Because the police think I'm over-working you two. And to avoid prosecution, I have to give you extra time off.
SpongeBob: But.... but....
Mr. Krabs: I know, I hate it just as much as you do. But rules are rules, you just can't break them!

TO BE CONTINUED....

'To Be Continued'? Aww.... I wanted to read it all in one sitting! You're seriously one of the best Spongebob fic writers ever; the stories you write sound like they could be actual episodes.

Do you have a fanfiction.net account? If so, just post the story there, and then post the link here, so people don't have to scroll through a huge wall-o-text.

If not, you should get one.

I will think about it.

PART TWO

French Narrator: Later that evening....

Squidward: Another ten hours of my life have been wasted, well at least it's only five minutes until tge usual closing time. Since there's no customers I suppose Mr. Krabs won't mind if I go to the bathroom.

In the kitchen

SpongeBob: Well, time to pack it in for the night. I suppose I'd better wash my greasy hands.

SpongeBob enters the bathroom

SpongeBob: Hi, Squidward!
Squidward: Hey, SpongeBrat.
SpongeBob: (Laughing) That name gets funnier every time you say it, it's almost as if you mean it.
Squidward: I do mea....
SpongeBob: ....But we both know you don't! (Laughs)

Outside the bathroom, Mr. Krabs walks to the front door

Mr. Krabs: Squidward? SpongeBob?

No answer

Mr. Krabs: They must have already left.

Mr. Krabs leaves, locking the doors

In the bathroom

SpongeBob: Isn't it strange that all the customers left earlier today?
Squidward: That's because we're closing five minutes earlier today.... Oh no! I completely forgot!

In a panic, Squidward and SpongeBob rush to the front door and try to leave

Squidward: Locked!
SpongeBob: Let me try. (Walks to the door) Ummmm.... Mr. Door, sir? Me and Squudward would like to leave so we were wondering if you could open for us.
Squidward: SpongeBob, you twit! Doors are lifeless, they can't simply open for us.

We see a tear come from the door

SpongeBob: I know, I'll call Patrick, he'll know what to do.

SpongeBob gets out a phone
In Patrick's rock, we see Patrick watching TV until his phone starts to ring, he answers it
Patrick: Hello Lisa.
SpongeBob: Lisa?
Patrick: (Embarassed) Oh, hey SpongeBob. Hee-hee!
SpongeBob: Patrick, isn't Lisa the aspie girl you had a crush on in school?
Patrick: Yes.... I MEAN NO! What do you want anyway?
SpongeBob: Me and Squidward are locked in The Krusty Krab and we need you to help us get out.
Patrick: Why didn't you call Sandy?
SpongeBob: She's on a three-day trip to Texas, remember?
Patrick: Oh. But what do you want me to do?
SpongeBob: Could you call Mr. Krabs and....?
Patrick: Hello? Hello?

SpongeBob reads the message on the phone, which says "battery dead"

SpongeBob: Darn it, the battery's dead!

TO BE CONTINUED.... (Sorry, but there's a lot to write so I need to break it down into parts)

PART THREE

Squidward: I never liked phones anyway, not after what happened last time.

Begin Flashback
We see Squidward at The Cash Register, the phone rings

Squidward: Hello?
Patrick: I'd like to speak to Mrs. Freak, first name Ima.
Squidward: Hold on. (To customers) Hey everyone, Ima Freak here? Hey everyone, Ima Freak! Ima Freak!
Fish: Of course you are, with a nose like that!

All of the customers laugh

Squidward: Wait a minute! (To person on phone) Listen, if I ever find out who you are I'll have you banned from this restaurant for good!

End Flashback

Squidward: Ever since that happened I had that phone removed.
SpongeBob: Wow. But how are we gonna get out of here?
Squidward: Can't you just slide through the doors?
SpongeBob: No, ever since the last time I did that Mr. Krabs enhanced the doors to stop Sponge Burglars getting in.
Squidward: Whatever.... JUST GET ME OUT OF HERE!! !!

Squidward tries to open the doors as hard as he can

Squidward: It's no use. We're trapped like rats.
SpongeBob: If we're underwater, how do you know about rats?
Squidward: Good question. Well, if we're gonna have to make rules. One - stay away from me. Two - stay in the kitchen. Three - I get dibs on the office.
SpongeBob: So you mean it's like we're having a sleepover?
Squidward: NO!! !!

Narrator: Later that same evening....

We see Squidward in the office watching TV, there is a huge fort outside to keep SpongeBob away

Squidward: (Talking to characters on TV)

Squidward: Oh Laura, how could you survive so much love pain? (Cries)

SpongeBob overhears in the kitchen

SpongeBob: Sounds like Squidward is watching one of those romantic love shows.

That was really good. I could really imagine it as if a show. Keep it up.

I could just about imagine that as a real episode. Keep it up!