Could someone please proofread my essay?

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01 Mar 2009, 4:49 pm

oblio wrote:
IdahoRose wrote:
oblio wrote:
advice: search for economics, ditch the political correctness and your road to her heart


I don't understand what you're talking about.


Pray forgive dear IdahoRose, thou art....

and yet... however genuine one's wording, ...

... the easier it is for the critical reader to understand your point as (also) being self-serving
[you had reason for being polite to the parents, did you not?]; ...

... the weaker one's argument works. [that seems a bit off, grammatically, humm]

and, ultimately: self-interest works best:
make them understand it is not in YOUR but in THEIR (the readers') best interest:
MONEY talks a thousand words... (to boost the indeed lowish wordcount)

keep your eyes on the ball:

It'sTheEconomy,Stupid/toxic@RobertO.iii


i do not think that your criticism is fair or relevant.