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Toucan
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02 Jun 2008, 5:40 pm

Asperger's Syndrome

My endless journey through my mind,
may be the end of all mankind,
for trying to confine this epic mess,
is not a skill I can possess,

people run,
people stray,
apologies seem to dismay,
What have I done wrong?
the children claim I don't belong,

What will my words incite?
could it be that they will spite?
maybe I'm just too uptight.

My obsessions are often strange,
and dates and times must be arranged,
if not I'm afraid I will decline,
it's something I cannot define.

love for humans isn't easy,
especially for those whose social skills are sleazy,
realization is the key,
live your life with hope and glee.

the journey may be tough, I knew,
these awkward traits I must subdue,
hope is still here for me,
that is one thing I can guarantee.

Written by me! :D
I posted this in General, but it seems better to place it here.



MissConstrue
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02 Jun 2008, 8:45 pm

Great poem. I think poems are the best way to express what one is going through or what is being reflected in the presence of things. :)


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28 Jul 2009, 3:05 am

terrific poem, I can identify with that, especially "epic mess"



mistercheech
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30 Jul 2009, 2:12 am

lol, please don't rhyme.

otherwise you'll end up doing things like rhyming strange with arranged.