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larteaga
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14 Dec 2013, 10:52 am

:( I just woke up and overslept it has been a horrid week at work and home I feel sooo overwhelm so I am trying to cope I wrote this:

I will never be loved
I will never be appreciated
Nobody here and nobody there
I cannot flow with the waters
Only move with the branches ....
and leaves of the trees
as they beckon me to join them
yet I cannot reach.


I don't know if its a poem or what I just didn't want to follow any rules not even in writing that's why I hav left commas and caps off only when I want to.



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14 Dec 2013, 8:23 pm

Your poem is beautiful and very meaningful. You don't have to follow the rules. You may express and write it any way you wish. And I can relate to it very well. Here's a hug for you.


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larteaga
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17 Dec 2013, 9:48 pm

Thanx. I like the Wreck it Ralph quote. I'm hanging in there.