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Shadowgirl
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14 Nov 2007, 8:36 pm

My smile where are you
Where have you gone
What has made you take a mile

Things are not the same since you walked away
Left me in disarray

How I try to make it look like your here
Then I wonder who am I kidding
Why should I even bother fibbing

Many can't see how hard it really is
While there are those who make it look cool
They are nothing but fools

My smile where are you
Where have you gone
What could have brought this on

Please come back to me
I want to again see what it was like
Before you left me here with nothing but a tear



JerryHatake
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14 Nov 2007, 9:14 pm

That a very nice poem you wrote, Shadowgirl.

It is inspiring to read.


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hoqnq
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15 Nov 2007, 2:44 am

Nice. Made me more sad, but still, good one.



Shadowgirl
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15 Nov 2007, 9:01 pm

I would like to get this published if possible maybe for depression books or whatever.